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The Candle-Flowers

小樓燭花詞

SourceYijian Zhi (Record of the Listener)
AuthorHong Mai
EraSouthern Song dynasty · Shaoxing 15 (1145)
Writtenc. 1160–1200
PoetryFateMarvels
A small upstairs room at night with five young candidates and a courtesan, two candles whose wicks have bloomed into pearly blossoms, a brush and fine paper on the table
Illustration generated by AI, based on the ancient Chinese text.

On the fifteenth day of the third month of the fifteenth year of the Shaoxing era I sat the decree examination at Lin’an. The third session was finished, and it was still early when we came out of the hall. Two other candidates, He Shan (Boming) and Xu Bo (Shengfu), proposed a walk through the markets. My uncle Bangzhi (Yingxian) and a man of my own district, Xu Liangzuo (Shunju), had finished the provincial examination and came along with us. In this way we came to Baojian Street.

Boming had been in the habit of visiting a courtesan called Sun Xiaojiu, and he dragged us off to call at her house. Wine was set out in her upstairs room. The night moon was bright as day and fell straight across the rail and the table. The two candles by the inner partition had knotted into flower, brilliant as a string of pearls.

Sun was shrewd by nature and knew how to handle an occasion. She addressed the company:

“Tonight the moon is pure, the candles show a lucky sign, and you five gentlemen have all matched your skill at the secretariat. That you will be entered on the high list admits of no doubt. Let each of you compose one song-lyric to record the fact, so it may be a good story another day.”

And she fetched five sheets of Wu paper and laid them on the table.

Shengfu, Yingxian and Shunju all excused themselves. Boming, bright and quick, took up the brush and wrote a Huanxi Sha:

A hasty cup and plate, calling on a girl of jade; the lamp has flowered for luck, and spring comes to the seat. She asks her gentleman for a line — and wants it strange and new. Eyebrows faint, eyes tender, the feeling flows and flows; cloud-light, willow-soft, the intent entirely true — from now on wind and moon belong to an idle man.

They passed it round and admired it. The only regret was that the last line conceded too much.

I followed with a Linjiang Shuixian:

The bright mats hold their pleasure, and pleasure is at its height; the tall house is layered with excellent air. At the hairpin’s head, in small seal-script, the candle-flower is red: it must carry good news, and bring it to the master of the house. The cassia moon at the full, the spring just at its half; the Broad Cold palace deep and green; the Lady of the Moon facing us, east of the curved rail. The cloud-ladder, I know, is not far — on level feet I mount the east wind.

Sun filled a cup to the brim and pressed it on me.

“You will certainly be placed high, sir,” she said. “This omen was arranged for you alone.”

And in the event I was indeed reported by name and granted a degree. The other four were not one of them successful.

Original classical Chinese text · 原文

紹興十五年三月十五日,予在臨安試詞科,第三場畢,出院時尚早。同試者何善伯明、徐搏升甫,相率游市。時族叔邦直應賢、鄉人許良佐舜舉省試罷,相與同行。因至抱劍街。伯明素與倡孫小九來往,遂拉訪其家,置酒於小樓。夜月如晝,正臨欄几。內廂兩燭結花,粲然若連珠。 孫倡固黠慧解事,乃白坐中曰:「今夕桂魄皎潔,燭花呈祥,五君皆較藝蘭省,其為登名高第可證不疑。願各賦一詞紀實,且為它日一段佳話。」遂取吳牋五幅,寘于桌上。 升甫、應賢、舜舉皆謝不能。伯明俊爽敏捷,即操筆作浣溪沙一闋曰:「草草杯盤訪玉人,燈花呈喜坐添春。邀郎覓句要奇新。黛淺波嬌情脈脈,雲輕柳弱意真真。從今風月屬閒人。」衆傳觀歎賞,獨恨其末句失意。 予續成臨江水仙曰:「綺席留歡歡正洽,高樓佳氣重重。釵頭小篆燭花紅。直須將喜事,來報主人公。桂月十分春正半,廣寒宫殿葱葱。姮娥相對曲欄東。雲梯知不遠,平步躡東風。」 孫滿酌一觥相勸曰:「學士必高中,此瑞殆為君設也。」已而予果奏名賜第,餘四人皆不偶。

From 《小樓燭花詞》, Yijian Zhi, 丙志卷七. Translated in full, including both song-lyrics. The 詞科 (decree examination for draftsmen) was the most prestigious of the Song examinations; 桂魄 is the moon; 蘭省 is the imperial secretariat; 廣寒宮 is the moon-palace.

Source. From Yijian Zhi (Record of the Listener) (夷坚志), by Hong Mai , c. 1160–1200. The original text is in the public domain; this English rendering and the accompanying notes are original work.
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